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The wind’s eerie cry reached its climax as leaves shook and the ground stirred. Tonight was drowned in a black blanket full of grey clouds that covered the indigo sky; the moon scarcely peeked through occasional openings, and, at times, glowered through the dark veil. Clashes and rumbles echoed from behind verdant mountains, a warning that a strong storm would soon approach the small town.

Caught between the winds’ and the rain’s indecisive direction and heavy force was Yuuki, hissing profanities that were made inaudible by the inimical environment. Drenched from head to toe, she sent a flurry of curses directed at her master. “Of all nights to do such a thing,” Yuuki seethed, glaring over at the one house whose garden was slightly visible from the right side angle of the front. “…Of all nights!” Yuuki continued her irrepressible rant, “You just had to give me an order on this sloppy night, didn’t you, Master?”

Sharp, black eyes quickly scanned the surrounding area, and once she finally caught a glimpse of a covered porch, a smile lit across her face for the first time that night. As she stepped onto the wooden surface, Yuuki stopped herself from sending another curse her master’s way when she spotted a group of Morning Flowers in the garden.

For the second time that night, Yuuki smiled. Walking out into the evolving storm, she gently pried a single Morning Flower from the soil. Thinking about how lovely its bright colors would stand out against her rich, black hair, she situated the flower above her cat-like ears. “Master.” Her voice was calm this time, timid even, with no trace of the frustration she had felt moments ago ever being present. Her eyes became distant as a forbidden memory recalled itself, and her heart danced as she thought of the satisfaction and attention that would accompany the accomplishment of this mission.

My orders… Yuuki’s orders had been stern and direct: to capture the girl before daybreak. Shaking away the memory and enveloping herself with anticipation of the rewards she would receive upon arriving home—with the girl intact—she stepped back onto the porch.

“Here I come, Hiraku.” With that, she quietly slid the door open, engulfed by darkness upon entry.
©2008-2009 ~Phu-Phu-Hugs-Me
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First, because I said I'd dedicate a poem [buthaven'tbeenabletowriteone] to this girl:
Chapter dedication: Her name's ~Shien279! The comments I receive from her can’t be categorized in anything else but “spontaneous” and, at times, “entirely wacky” in a way that makes me laugh. So this is for you, love, and your insanely awesome personality that puts a smile on my face!
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In other news, this is just a rough draft... I haven't written much in forever times forever. Just you all know, this is the first chapter to a story I had come up with THREE YEARS AGO O_O But then I lost interest in it because I could never figure out to start off the first chapter! Haha, go figure I find out how so many years later >.>

Anyway, like I said, this is a rough draft. I really want to make it longer, so please point things out that you'd like me to add in, elaborate on, etc.

I have no idea if a Morning Flower actually exists... This Yuuki and Master character just call this particular flower a "Morning Flower" due to their past -whichIcan'texplainorI'llgivespoilersawaySHHH-


:bulletred:You can find the prologue in my gallery!
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this one caught me offguard Jenny!
Haven't been active on dA but I decided to go through the pile of deviations yesterday...and I have to express a

HUUUUUUUUUUGEEEEEEEEe thank you D:D

:) I feel flattered.

Yuuki must be a pretty vain girl, by the wayXD

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And if I do, it just means I forgot.
I like it. It was very anime in feeling (if that's what you were going for) ^^ I don't know if it was just the name that did if for me or the situation (though it was probably most definitely the name lol) I pictured it with Cowboy Bebop animation. Good start. Keep it up!

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Felicitations, malefactors! I am endeavoring to misappropriate the formula in for the preparation of affordable comestibles. Who will join me?! –

Plankton from Spongebob Squarepants
I haven't been active on DA either u.u I've had a lack of inspiration.

>.> Yuuki is very vain, but not to much as one of my other characters ;P Yuuki's more stubborn. But she's my second favorite character in this story line.

:lol: You're welcome :clap:

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Candy talks to strangers
Thinks her life's in danger
No one gives a damn about her hair

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Anime feeling? O.o? I've never heard that description before XD Ah, I was aiming more for fantasy-ish, but it'll probably be more evident as the story progresses.

I got the idea after watching The Great Yokai War (I think it's called that... =0 ).
And what?! No suggestions? :omfg: I think that might be a first from you.

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Candy talks to strangers
Thinks her life's in danger
No one gives a damn about her hair

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hahaha. Well, I was thinking that it does need work, but that I was too tired to be able to give you anything even close to coherent at this stage or phase. The thing I can say at least now is that it could be longer. VERY brief chapter, even for Mary Higgins Clark. LOL ;)

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Felicitations, malefactors! I am endeavoring to misappropriate the formula in for the preparation of affordable comestibles. Who will join me?! –

Plankton from Spongebob Squarepants
Well, yes... That's why I said I want it to be longer. But I'm just stuck, so I'm asking if there's anything people want to me to add in/elaborate on/etc. D=

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Candy talks to strangers
Thinks her life's in danger
No one gives a damn about her hair

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Gahasp, this is so good D:
Hmm, it is quite short but I know it's a rough draft, I just can't think of anything to add!

This was from three years ago? Wow, but it's still really good! D:

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No, 'tard! =P The story IDEA is from three years ago.

>.< I need to add more :'[

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Candy talks to strangers
Thinks her life's in danger
No one gives a damn about her hair

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OH!
I see :D
And you recently started writing it?
Or as that weird fire-on-campus guy writes WRIGHTING it?

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Love life, respect death

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